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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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At the same time, it was difficult to tell the characters apart. The shading, lighting, colors, and body structures seem to change from panel to panel. I could tell that a fight was occurring, someone got beat up, and a tiger spirit popped out, but I had to go back and study the panels to figure out where the main character went.
My suggestion would be to differentiate the color pallets and clothes of the little boy and the bullies, and don't be afraid to keep the shadows and highlights the same according to the surroundings.
This is an example of what I mean: [link]